Can you find it

[Kindness]

Hello everyone

How are you all today

How about a correcting game

"What does he mean by this"

:confused: :confused: :confused:

Well the game is as the following

Each one provides a sentence with a mistake

and we try to discover the mistake

The one who discovers the mistake

provides us with a sentence of his own

[Kindness]

Well, I wiil start with the first sentence

My friend and I reads a story everyday.

[مستسلم]

hi my dear

the wrong of your sentence in (reads) which must be without s because the subject is (my friend and l), not just my friend


my sentence

.. but not to you ..


my sister read every day

[عاشق الشهادة]

also the mistake in read it should be reads
I will going to supemarket

[holyhousehold]

hi my friends I would like to thank you for your effort
the mistake in this sentence is will as well as going you can say
I will go with out ing
or you can say I am going
your friend HOLYHOUSEHOLD

[زكريا]

no me not can fint ti

[علي رضا]

Thanks my brother Kindness for the lovely & useful topic


no me not can fint ti


My friend
زكريا

You can say
No, I can not find it


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It is my turn now

what is the mistake when I say

I need to drinking water



My greetings to you

Ali Rida

[Kindness]

The mistake in your sentence is

the additional ing after the infinitive marker

it should be

I need to drink water

[Kindness]

Now whats wrong with the following sentence

My computer feels sad

[نـٌثر الكون عطـــــــراً]

Hi brothers
i don"t know if the mistakes you mean either in grammer or in meaning

there for, i can say the mistake in ur sentence is the verb( feels) you have 2 say
my computer is sad

my sentence is
i bought 5 fishs

thanks AlOoOoOot

Your sister

[بوشهيد]

Hi brothers

Thank you Kindness (http://www.shoaba.com/vb/member.php?u=13) for this game
The mistake in your sentence is
i it should be capital not small

My sentence is
Where does your friend works? good luck

[نـٌثر الكون عطـــــــراً]

Bo- Shaheed

not the capital i the mistake i mean

soooo<< make sure plz

ma regards

[Kindness]

i don"t know if the mistakes you mean either in grammer or in meaning

there for, i can say the mistake in ur sentence is the verb( feels) you have 2 say
my computer is sad

my sentence is
i bought 5 fishs

thanks AlOoOoOot

Your sister


You right my friend

The mistake is in the meaning of the sentence

It is a semantical mistake

[Kindness]

i bought 5 fishs




Come on guys the mistake is obvious

I will give a chance to answer it then

I will come back

[علي رضا]

Thanks brother kindness





i bought 5 fishs



It should be like this

I bought 5 fishes





Now my turn

I did not drove your car

[نـٌثر الكون عطـــــــراً]

Ohooooooooooo brothers

no body know the mistake in ma sentence>> how come?

any way>> the mistake i mean is the word( fish) not ( fishs) coz this word the singler same like plural!!

thanks aLl

[refresh]

Thanks dear نثر الكون عطرا
whats your new sentence, then

thanks alot

[رحيق مختوم]

Hi everybody

the mistake in Ali Rida's sentence is:

I did not drive your car

after did the verb must be infinitive


my sentence is........

He has clean his room already

[refresh]

Thanks brothers
I think the sentence should be
He had already cleaned his room

My sentence is
I used go to sleep early

[رحيق مختوم]

Thanke Refresh

IT is all right if you leave has and the mistake is (cleaned) as you did


In your sentence the mistake is

I used to go to bed early

[شفاف]

Hello pals

I'd like to join you in this nice and useful game

Brother '' Raheeg Makhtoom " You didn't provide any sentence ..therefore I will provide you with my wrong sentence

I visit the Eiffle Tower when I am in Paris

[علي رضا]

My brother

شفاف

I expect that you mean the future tens in your sentence

So, it should be like this

I will visit the Eiffle Tower when I am in Paris


Write


?


Cheers


Ali Rida

[Kindness]

Well my friend your sentence can be

corrected in more than one way

One of them is the one my friend Ali Ridha mentioned

A second one is that you can say

I visited the Eiffle Tower when I was in Paris

[Far!s]

hi my dear




my sentence is

I have saw you since I were in high school

my sentence has two mistakes

[Kindness]

I think the two mistakes are

I have saw you since I were in high school

saw should be seen

and were should be was

But also I think you should have used the verb know instead of see

so the sentence would be

I have known you since I was in high school

[علي رضا]

Hello my friends



Here is my sentence



I am write on the keyboard slow


What is wrong with my sentence ? , there are more than one

:)

*****

By the way, I have fixed this topic, it is really interactive and educational


Cheers

Ali Rida

[Kindness]

This time my friend

I will give the others the chance to answer

but not for so long

[نـٌثر الكون عطـــــــراً]

hi all
ma brother Ali
your sentence has many mistakes but i do"nt want 2 determain them just i will say the correct ones
1- am write slowly on the board
2- Ma writing on the board is slow
coz ( slow) should be either adv OR adj

thanks AloOoOoOt

[Kindness]

I didn't understand what my friend just said

But I will try to identify the mistakes in the sentence

I am write on the keyboard slow

You can say

My writing on the keyboard is slow

or

I am writing slowly on the keyboard

And also it is best to use the verb Type instead of Write

[بوشهيد]

My brother Kindness (http://www.shoaba.com/vb/member.php?u=13) .. Where is your mistake sentence ?
My sentence is
Ahmed is the man whom i have met five years ago

[Kindness]

Come on guys our friend

بوشهيد

has provided us with such an interesting sentence

[الشاب الظريف]

Nice topic as usual

this is the first time to come here . I feel so proud

I will be frequant member

so
my correction is
I bought 5 fishes

and my sentence is

I ate to apples

best regards

[الشاب الظريف]

see my friend

your mistake is

U should take out ( have) is not it

to be : whom i met lap lap lap
accept my regards

[الشاب الظريف]

now it is my turn

There are two plier in that gym

Best regards

[Kindness]

MY Friend
الشاب الظريف (http://www.shoaba.com/vb/member.php?u=473)
Before you give us a sentence of your own

you should check whether your correction is right or wrong

Then you put a sentence

[الشاب الظريف]

Thanx for your care

yes ,
but i did not see any one to check my correction

so ,
I did that

[Kindness]

Its ok

But we all should have

Some patience

so that this this topic would be organized

thank you

[الشاب الظريف]

ok my bro
u r the manager
I will do what u said
C.U

[Kindness]

Please accept my gratitude

[Kindness]

Now my friends

How about this new sentence

Yesterday, I went to home early

Is correct or incorrect

[shoaba boy]

Now my friends

How about this new sentence

Yesterday, I went to home early

Is correct or incorrect

No need to put to

We have to say
Yesterday, I went home early
Or
I went home early yesterday


Now
Try to discover the mistake

He has did his homework



Good luck

[Kindness]

Well done my friend

[علي رضا]

Thanks my brother
Shoaba boy

:)

I like your participations


Now, coming to your sentence



He has did his homework






Should be written this way

He has done his homework


**********

Now

What is the mistake in following one

The dolphin is a good swimming

?

[shoaba boy]

Now

What is the mistake in following one

The dolphin is a good swimming


?


Oooooooooooooooooooooo


Tht dolphin is a good swimmer


Next


They are watching TV when the thief stole their baggages
:D

[جازورا]

Hi
؛؛؛؛ )
I wannna 2 participate here


They are watching TV
when the thief stole their baggages

They were watching TV when the theif stole their baggages

THE ERROR IS
are
THE CORRECTION IS
were
THE REASON
This sntense is in Past Continous tens

NOW

Where is the mistake

THE DOG IS BARKING

[Kindness]

Well my friend, I am really not sure about it

But I think the mistake is

Either you add an adverbial of time
THE DOG IS BARKING RIGHT NOW

or you change the tense to the present simple tense

THE DOG BARKS

WELL AM I CORRECT

[shoaba boy]

Well my friend, I am really not sure about it

But I think the mistake is

Either you add an adverbial of time
THE DOG IS BARKING RIGHT NOW

or you change the tense to the present simple tense

THE DOG BARKS

WELL AM I CORRECT


Ok dear Kindness

Give us your wrong sentence

We are waiting

[Kindness]

Well my friend Shoaba boy

I think we have to wait for our friend
جازورا (http://www.shoaba.com/vb/member.php?u=524)
to tell us whether the answer is right or wrong

[shoaba boy]

Well my friend Shoaba boy

I think we have to wait for our friend
جازورا (http://www.shoaba.com/vb/member.php?u=524)
to tell us whether the answer is right or wrong

:confused:
Where is he

He is lost

Jazora
Where are you brother
:confused:

[جازورا]

I 'm here ma friends

I'll tell ma story for this sentence

Ma sentence in my mind was

THE DOG IS PARKING

SO

The error is Parking

I wanna 2 show the differce between PARk and BARK

but I write it unfortuantely as BARKING

I see it after a one edit

OOOOOOOOOOOOOH

IT's BARKING

I wannna 2 reedit it

I cannnnot

IT's not allowed

YA ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLAH
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEESH
HALHALLLLLLLLLLLLLAH
YA RABBBBBBBBBBBBBY

YA SUPERVISOR

U have to find a solution

WE NEED 2 EDIT our comments from 1 to 10 times

WHAT'S THE WRONG WITH IT ????????????????

OK

MA NEW SENTENCE IS

THE DONKEY IS PRAYING

[علي رضا]

Dear brother


جازورا

I can not see the mistake in your sentence



THE DONKEY IS PRAYING


Grammatically , the sentence is correct, unless you have another point of view

:)

*********

Now, it is my turn guys

Al-Shoaba a great village

[آخر]

Dear brother



جازورا

I can not see the mistake in your sentence



Grammatically , the sentence is correct, unless you have another point of view

:)

*********

Now, it is my turn guys


Al-Shoaba a great village


Come on, Give us Something harder than This
I refuse to Answer because its so damn Easy m8
Correct one Shall be As Follows:
Al-Shoaba IS a great village

[آخر]

My Turn then ?
Ok...

I never Feel the Urge to Stop writing until my Last day is upon me,
and my pens has been broken with all Blood surrounding me.

[shoaba boy]

THE DONKEY IS PRAYING





The mistake is in the meaning

Pray
يصلي

bray
ينعق

So

The meaning is obvious now
Is not it

[جازورا]

YES

YOU GET IT

SHOABA'S BOY

[Kindness]

My friend
آخر (http://www.shoaba.com/vb/member.php?u=282)
I will try to identify the mistakes in your sentence

I will never Feel the Urge to Stop writing until my Last day is upon me,
and my pens have been broken with all Blood surrounding me.

But there is something strange about the whole construction of the sentence

[shoaba boy]

Ok Kindness

Brother

Give us the sentence

I am waiting

[Kindness]

Here you are my friend

I and you are very good friends

This one is easy but the next will be extremely difficult

[Kindness]

Come on guys
its not that difficult

[علي رضا]

I and you are very good friends

Brother Kindness

It appears to me that there is nothing wrong with your sentence


BUT

talking about " PLOITENESS", the sentence should be written as follows


You and I are very good friends

:)


Waiting your comment on that


yours

Ali Rida

[Kindness]

Thats what I meant brother

You've got it right

Waiting for yours

[علي رضا]

OK


:)

:What's wrong with the following one


I have write a letter to my friend oversease invite him to visiting my country

??


Have a nice day

[نـٌثر الكون عطـــــــراً]

Hi all
GoOoOoO morning

the correct one is
I have written a letter to my friend oversease inviting him to visit my country


ma regard

[علي رضا]

Our Sister

نـٌثر الكون عطـــــــراً


You got it there perfectly
:)

Give us now one of yours


Cheers

Ali Rida

[نـٌثر الكون عطـــــــراً]

Hi all

ma mOoOoOoOd tonight is very bad:(:confused:
any way
am sentence is
It is normaly 2 say thank 2 your host before you leaving


am waiting u

thanx
.

[Kindness]

Well
I think the answer is

It is normal 2 say thanks 2 your host before you leave

[نـٌثر الكون عطـــــــراً]

ma brother kindness
ur answer is not right

try again
thanx

[Kindness]

Well
How about this one

It is normal 2 say thank you 2 your host before leaving

Am I correct this time

[نـٌثر الكون عطـــــــراً]

GoOoOoOd morning
YYYYYYha
you score the gaol this time

thanx aloOaOt

[Kindness]

Well now its my turn

Here you are

For your informations, your diet should not depend
on many types of foods to be healthy

What is wrong with my sentence and why

[Kindness]

Well
If it is that difficult for you
I'll have to answer it myself

[علي رضا]

For your informations, your diet should not depend
on many types of foods to be healthy




brother Kindness

In my openion , the diet should depend on many types of foods to be healty

So , the "not" is to be taken out of the sentence to make it correct

?Am i right


Ali Rida

[Kindness]

Well my friend

Your luck betrayed you this time

You'll have till tomorrow before I answer it

Come on just focus

It is very easy

[Kindness]

My sentence was
For your informations, your diet should not depend
on many types of foods to be healthy

As you should have noticed
The nouns Information and Food are

Uncountable nouns so they don't take a plural marker

[shoaba boy]

OoOoOoOok
Try

I has better go now

[Kindness]

Your sentence should be

I had better go now

Well
What do you think

[shoaba boy]

Your sentence should be

I had better go now

Well
What do you think


I think you have to put a new wrong sentence
:D
I am waiting
Never be late dear

[علي رضا]

All right

Correct the next one


.The sun rise on Riyadh at 5:05 p.m

?

[Kindness]

Well

I think that your sentence should be like this

The sun rises on Riyadh at 5:05 p.m

[Kindness]

Now
Try this one

Book/is/the most/ the library/ this/in/interesting

Try to arrange these words

[نـٌثر الكون عطـــــــراً]

This is the most intersting book in the library

[Kindness]

Correct

Now Its your turn

[علي رضا]

Well

I think that your sentence should be like this

The sun rises on Riyadh at 5:05 p.m

:)

Got you

______


Did you notice that I said p.m

?It should be a.m ,because the sun rises in the morning, doesn't it
:)


Any how, that was a slight mistake in the sentence

The major mistake which is ( rises) you did correct it

thanks brother


Waiting for the next participation


Yours

Ali Ridha

[Kindness]

You got me right this time

But be aware that I will return the favour

[علي رضا]

But be aware that I will return the favour


Looking forward to it

:)

[shoaba boy]

:mad:
Where is the next sentence
:D

[Kindness]

Well

How about you provide us with something new

[shoaba boy]

:26:

He can does his homework himself

[Kindness]

Come on guys

Its an easy one

[علي رضا]

He can do his homework himself

[Kindness]

Now try checking out this one


By the time you get to the airport, you will find waiting



There is a missing word

[الزير]

I guess that the missing word is "passengers"
the sentence will be:
By the time you get to the airport, you will find passengers waiting

[الزير]

SO ... If I did correctly, my sentence is :

How many book you have in your own library?

[Kindness]

I think the sentence should be


How many books do you have in your library

[بوشهيد]

Hi guys . . Try to find the mistake

In case there is a fire,you have call fire men

[عبدالاله]

In case there is a fire,you have to call fire men

if my answer is correct my sentence is

-yesterday my father tall me to bring his car

see ya

[Kindness]

Hi all

Yesterday my father TOLD me to bring his car.

The problem is that the verb was not in the correct form.

[Kindness]

Now tell me what is the problem
with the following sentence

Recent, we need to keep up with the modern technology

Come on show me your true knowledge

[عبدالاله]

I DIDN’T SEE any problem with that sentence

but maybe with with the word recent

i am waiting ..

thanx again

[shoaba boy]

Recently, we need to keep up with the modern technology


Next

I was shopping when he sees me